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.:PKMC:. Randall app

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Yeah I don't like Etolie anymore xD So the new fella is Randall! I love my Blitzle butt <3 I hope I get in!

:iconpkmn-crossing:

edit; i'm pretty sure he was declined. oh well



[ B a s i c s ]



NAME: Randall Markus McKenzie
NICKNAME: Randy, Mark.
AGE: 22 Years
BIRTHDAY: 18th October
GENDER: Male
NATURE: Relaxed
POKEMON: Blitzle [No. #522]
HOMETOWN: Falbruy Town



[ D e l v i n g D e e p e r ]



HISTORY: Randall was born in a small field, located in a miniature town called Falbruy. His parents were always there when the small Blitzle needed them most, and he was the center of attention in their lives. One year, Randall’s mother told him she was pregnant again with a little boy. Thrilled, Randall couldn’t wait to meet his little brother. In his room, he had set it up all ready for his brother to move in and so they could play games, have a laugh and do what brothers do – love each other. Until he was actually delivered, Randall noticed something that he didn’t have but his brother did.

His brother called Jackie was born without a leg. Surpised, he would often ask his mother what was wrong with him, but she wouldn’t dare let him know. After Jack was brought into the world, he became the center of attention towards his parents, Randall often being left out from the family. His brother needed therapy and care, which the older blitzle was ready to do but his dad told him he wasn’t ready. This lead to Randall being laid back and became used to not doing anything for himself, leaving others to do it for him. This developed his lazy attitude, often leaving everyone to clean up after him. But as he entered school, his parents tried to get him back on track. Being so lazy he refused, often leaving his brother having to pitch in to do things for him.

As the family grew older, his parents started to notice the change in Randall. As he went to school, his mum and dad pushed him to do well, but the older blitzle didn’t care much.The work was extremely daunting, not to forget dull and all the teachers had a dislike for Randall with his careless attitude towards work. With failing grades and a disabled brother to take care of, his parents sat him down to be put into private classes in the high school building. Isolated from all his friends and kept on a strict routine of work. It wasn’t pleasant for anyone to go through. Randall didn’t like that either, but ended up with one qualification from his education, which was photography. He had developed a big interest in taking snappy photos from where he visited. Leaving education and sitting around home being a lazy butt, Randall needed to stretch his wings and find a new place to take photos of.

While reading the newspaper one day, he discovered Pokette town. He's decided to move there as soon as possible, to give his brother a chance to spread out in the house, with his walking progress becoming better. Another reason Randall moved is because his parents were clawing at his back, tempting him to go back into education and pass with more degrees. But that was boring and sounded like torture to the blitzle. Moving away is going to be hard for himself and his parents, but Randall knows moving away will make it better for his brother and himself.

HOBBY: Styling hair - another job Randall would have happily done is being a hairdresser.
JOB: Photography - Randall sometimes sells his prints of photos for a small amount of bells.


[B i t s a n d b o b s]



FAVORITE FOOD: Banana Sundae
FAVORITE BERRY: Custap berry
CATCHPHRASE: "...Kapeesh?" Or "...Kapeesh!"
EXTRAS:
:bulletpink: Randall is Pansexual! He leans more to girls than men though.
:bulletpink: Randall's favorite colours are Pink and Red.
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PixieParrot's avatar
Hello! I'll kindly critique your app for you. Please don't take me as a harsh critic I'd love to see your character make it into the group.

My critique is going to be harsh because the mods will be grading you harshly. Just a heads-up.

YES! An app that has proper spacing! Finally! (My pet peeve is huge walls of text or uneven spacing of paragraphs).

Anyway I like your character's history. Its complete and well-done. However there are a few nit-picky things I need to go over-

-Go into more detail why he didn't like school. Why didn't he do the work? (Besides him being lazy. XD).
-Why did he become so lazy? Go into more detail about that.
-How can his parents homeschool him if they have a disabled baby to take care of? Personally I'd find that harder. I suggest changing that around a bit.
-Go into more detail why he moved. What does he mean by "spread" his brother out a bit? Maybe they needed more room.

Overall good job! Just fix some things here and there and you'll be ready. Good luck!